surrogacy
What is your thesis (roughly stated) and what are the main points that support it?
Surrogate mothers should not be allowed in Japan because there are ethical, physical, and financial problems when I think about surrogate mothers and women who ask giving birth and children. Of course, women who cannot give birth children because of physical difficulties have rights to have children, so this topic is controvercial. However, there is another way to have children like adoption except surrogacy. To consider about the advantage of the greatest number of people who are three people involved in surrogacy in this case is important.
Why did you choose your topic?
I cannot choose the position toward this topic definitely, but I have opinion to state about surrogacy. And people in Japan also should consider this problem more seriously. That is why I chose this topic.
Hi Yuki,
ReplyDeleteThis is Chris Hoskins, your ARW teacher.
Your thesis statement is pretty clear. I'm satisfied that it can provide a good basis for your essay.
Thanks!
Hi! I also think your idea is very clear to understand. I wonder how I should approach to my thinking about surrogacy. It is a very difficult topic for me.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, do you mean surrogacy for women, or for people who cannot give birth children (including men)?
Thanks.
Hi, HIdetoshi!!!
ReplyDeletethank you for your comment;D
I also think it is difficult to decide clear position actually...
At first, i was thinking about only for women who cannot give birth, but now it is important to think about gay and lesbian,too i think!!!